I have finished my second draft and I am happy with it, I will finish my presentation before I send it to my tutor just in case I find out anything intresting I want to add along the way. I am quite nervous and inexperienced with public speaking and powerpoint but Wikihow has two good advice pages on these issues. (http://www.wikihow.com/Use-Microsoft-Office-PowerPoint) (http://www.wikihow.com/Do-a-Presentation-in-Class)